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A Fork in the Road by ~darkchill:icondarkchill:



I stand divided, ah fork in the road
Hesitate I stop unsure where to go
Contemplating, comparing, one to the other   
I just can’t decide which path, so I suffer
Undecided, unsure, and in doubt
To which road I would travel
To which life I’d live out
But still I stood unmoved afraid to choose
Not wanting to decide for what I might loose

So which way should I go?
Which one would be best?
The one to the right
Or the one to the left
This one looks nice.
But so does the next.
Two paths still un chosen
But to which should I step?

Over and over they relapsing in my mind
From the path I would take
To the one I’d leave behind
I just can’t decide which road I’d take
But that’s just it I can’t choose my fate
So I followed my heart and went straight
©2005-2009 ~darkchill
:icondarkchill:

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aspect on the way of life and how to choose that road

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:iconforgottenfairie:
eeeeeeh! new work! yey! i LOVE this i seriously do! as i was readin it i was thinkin that has got to be my favourite line and then on the next line i was like oh no actually i like this one too ... and thats just carried on through the whole thing. i really love the concept but more than that i just ADORE the way that u've used little things within it to make it seem almost more spoken - its makes it so much more touching and personal - eg.
But that’s just it I can’t choose my fate
it almost seems like someones said to u 'whats wrong, just decide' and thats ur answer to them. the words are just gorgeous but the meaning between them is immense. i totally love it .
beautiful. just beautiful.
:icondarkchill:
thanks for the comments and fav. your to kind :blush: your the best :)

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